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Thank you.

Mr B

Tuesday, June 29, 2010

A quick escape part 1

My legs were throbbing but i sprinted down the beach anyway, i couldn't look back
but i felt the velvety scarlet eyes boring into me i shuddered then
suddenly i felt the ground slipping away from underneath me then it
all went black...

When i woke up thunder clouds were just rolling in,
lightning struck all around me. "Help!!!" i yelled my voice
echoing round me but there was no answer. When i tripped i must have
hit my head because i was basicly drowning in a pool of my oswn blood
i felt faint but inch by inch to the gate were someone was waiting for me someone i
didn't want to see.
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  1. Courtney1:45 PM, August 06, 2010

    Hey, that is a really cool piece of writing, it's very interesting and I can't wait to read what happens next.I like where you have said "I felt the ground slipping away from underneath me then it all went black..." It's all really good, you just need to fix some spelling and punctuation errors :)
    Good job!

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