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Mr B

Monday, August 30, 2010

The mona mousa code book report

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I think that i did pretty well in this one but there is lots of ands and ums. I also think that next time it should be longer.

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  1. Mr B7:51 PM, August 30, 2010

    I agree Jess, a few ums in there, good review with leaving us wanting to know more.

    I like the use of titles and credits.

    Think about the placement of the web cam next time so we are not looking up your nose during the review.

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  2. Libby11:22 AM, August 31, 2010

    nice book report Jess I like how you left us in suspence.
    I also like how you have used lots of effects.

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