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Thank you.
Mr B
Wednesday, April 6, 2011
hop
For my birthday party my friends and I are going to the movie,s to see the movie hop. I really want to see the movie hop, because it look's really good I have seen the trailers of hop and really good and really really funny.
Hi Lydia, Great base to write from, What are the funny parts you remember from the trailers? Also can you please edit this work for capital letters. (I can see 6 that need changing)
Hi Lydia, Great base to write from, What are the funny parts you remember from the trailers? Also can you please edit this work for capital letters. (I can see 6 that need changing)
ReplyDeleteWhat did you think of the movie? who do you think would like seeing it?
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