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Thank you.

Mr B

Wednesday, June 30, 2010

A quick escape part 2

Someone must have hit me in the face so i fainted and woke up about an hour later
in a steel cage at Arons apartment. Aron came in suddenly with a piece of paper in one hand and a pen in the other
"right" he said "i will be back in a moment with a high powered brain transmitter to steal all your
good ideas" as he left the room i picked on the lock with a lazer but it
didn't budge until i noticed a jagged edge on the lock
i picked at it then it swung open easily.

Suddenly Aron came in carring gun "not so fast" he said,
the trigger was pulled, a bullet came speeding out i side stepped and the bullet
went wizzing at the speed of light into a electrical socket with a flash of golden
sparks and for the third time today i fell into a deep unconcious sleep.
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  1. Bridget9:49 AM, August 03, 2010

    This is a fantastic story. I can just picture in my head what is happening and that I am there. I think you can go far with this story. Keep the good work up.

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